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S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:47 am | |
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Art by [url=]I looked all over I can not find the artist But I still do not claim rights for anything but my graphis editing to it.[/url]. I do not claim this art as mine in any way, as it is owned by them. I will take down the picture if needed. Name:Satomi Angel Hitshyuuga (Known as S.A.H) Gender:Male Race:Elf/Human Deer Hybrid (in explanation apparently according to your head admin Hybrid is a seperate race and you are allowed to have another race. In it self it is really a hybrid either way but it is allowed appearently so I choose to be Elf/Dear Human Hybrid Age:18 Native Land: Mythur History: As a child Satomi was always the odd one of the elves that were in the region. He was a hybrid so it was explanatory, the giant antlers on his head were the show of it as well as the elf like ears on the side of his head. He dressed oddly from the rest of the elves. He loved the color black, ironically his eyes were of a bright green which was rather shocking considering, he loved the color black he absolutely hated his green emerald colored eyes. It was self explanatory that he was quite a loner, he liked getting everything done by himself. Satomi also had a great passion for apples, humorous as it is it has a significance in his life. Though his name is Satomi, many peoples just call him S.A.H, mostly because his name is a bit hard to pronounce and is too long to continue to recite over and over again. Satomi never really had any parents, or rather he did but they left him at birth. Elves had taken him in as their own till they died later on when he would turn sixteen. He knew how to How to take care of himself He knew how to use his resources, and knew how to hunt for himself. Satomi was often confused of the outside world, he never left his region, he knew nothing about the technology. And was often too scared or anxious to even leave to discover. Even though he is eighteen he still shows the attitude of a child learning new things due to the reason that he is ill informed on the world before him. After the death of his "foster" parents he isolated himself from everyone, wanting to be alone. One day while he was sulking still, a boy of the name of Motsuhiro found him. Motsu and Satomi became best of friends. Motsu was a human, so he was very caring, he didn't live in the region Satomi was from, but he often visited the region whenever he had time. Every time Motsu did come to visit Satomi, he brought a red juicy apple and would give it to Satomi with a smile always on his face. Satomi finally felt at peace. Sadly, all good must come to an end, Motsu one day did not show up to visit Satomi. Satomi began to sulk again. Later he would attempt to travel to the region Motsu was from, Satomi would surprise him. Though to his surprise, Satomi caught word that Motsu died to an illness. His friend was dying, everyday that he saw Satomi he was wasting his energy when he could be resting. Satomi in shock would go back to his sulking once more. Satomi's life was a bit messed up, and after learning of the death of his friend, he began to develop a multiple personality disorder from all the shock. Though in the process he would go into a state of amnesia from the event of his friend's death. He forgot all about Motsu, but for some reason when ever he saw an apple or got his hands on an apple he would savior it to every bite, as if each apple he ate would slowly recover the memory when it actually would not. Growing up Satomi began to have to personalities, one of his confusion and the other vulgar with both erotic/perverted and vial langue content. Personality:Satomi has multiple personalities of which takes part in three forms, Confusion and Insanity. -Confused-Satomi has the state of confused due to amnesia he has the memories of how to hunt and survive, but none of the new world. He gets very anxious when he sees something new and acts like a little child trying to figure out how the object works. He also would show intense confusion to the new races, as far as he knows he believes he is just an elf, when in reality everyone knows he is a hybrid/elf. A rare hybrid at that, the mix of a deer means his parents were of a rare species that rarely ever existed. It was unsure if Satomi was the only one of that specific Hybrid/Elf Race. -Insane-Satomi suffers under a disorder that he has no control of. This disorder, allows him to believe he is two people, of which causes him to have split personality. Mostly because of this personality he was sent to a state of amnesia from the shock of his friends death. So in place of him trying to forget his friend he became insane with vulgar language and perverted personality. In this state Satomi seems to act much like his actual age. Ever since the amnesia he was never the same, he was a bit morbid and deranged, but this only really showed when he saw blood, or if someone stole/ate/or killed one of his apples. Talents:+Spirit Prayers(incantation magic) +Disguising (is good at hiding his true appearance after watching how humans dress) +Healing +Purification Faults:-Not Perfect -Sinful -fears death -Knows nothing of the outside world Other:Can form weapons from Ki or the spirit of his body - Spoiler:
Haizu:http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_uOB6TOxfYWU/TCZiQc5l9OI/AAAAAAAAAVE/tqx6tD1kruE/s1600/8.jpg Uniyada:http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_uOB6TOxfYWU/TCZiP5RrS5I/AAAAAAAAAU8/gM6VobWu94A/s1600/9.jpg Uego:https://2img.net/h/i413.photobucket.com/albums/pp216/pain938/wep.jpg Iitzki:http://www.webacg.com/me/attachment/200909/28/61247_1254132068yqon.jpg FUego:http://orgdotorg.com/images/che1101.png UNji:http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_uOB6TOxfYWU/TCZiPgUqvjI/AAAAAAAAAU0/AQm3BEF_H6c/s1600/10.png
All rights to these weapon images goes to the anime Chaos; HEAd Role Play Sample: Highschool of the Dead ROLE PLAY: - Spoiler:
A male would be seen walking down the street heading to his house, something was weird it was way too quiet in the neighborhood. It was a Monday, but still none the less he expected something going on. Perhaps it was just because he just got out of the clinical hospital, he was still wearing his straight jacket, except it was unbuckled. His appearance made it very clear he possibly escaped from the Clinical Hospital. Shocking that is very difficult. He would sigh, toss up a red round object in the air, catch it and take a bite from the object. As he did so his hood from the straight jacket slipped down revealing his flame like tattoo on the right of his cheek and the black raven colored hair. Before he could take another bite he saw someone. Finally a person, he hasn't seen one in years. Suddenly his excitement turns to rage when the person began to wail on the gates of his fathers mansion. "Hey, Hey, Hey, what the fuck do you think you are doing?! That is not something to be hitting you stupid shit!" Noticing that the person didn't respond, he would sigh finish the last of his delicious apple and chuck the the remains at the person not responding to him. "Respond when I am talking to you shit face!"
It is now that Person turns around, though not really in a "human" state, more of an almost dead state. In fact yes it was quite certain that the person was dead. "What the fuck?! Halloween is over dipshit!" It is at this moment that the person or creature charges are the male. He would start to notice the blood oozing from the creatures body, and the pale like figure to the skin. Eyes now in shocked the male looks around and sees a pole lying on the ground. This didn't surprise him it looked like if fell off the abandoned house that he lived across the street from. It was used for the bars off the windows it must have just broken off. He would pick it up to notice it was rusty. "Shit, second I hit him with this the damn thing will bust...I have to make sure I have a running start when it does." Within the time rate of ten seconds from the creature lunging itself at the male, and the pole smashing the creature in the face shattering the pole into pieces, the male bolted to the gates of his mansion. In the form of so much adrenaline, the male kicked up his feet against the gate while running towards it enough to lever himself over to the other side. For now he was safe. Though he had a feeling the gate wasn't gonna hold up for too long.
Noticing that his parents cars were not here, he had to break in the house. Another thing sprung to his mind, where were they and did they know anything about this damn thing? He would remember that one of the windows never locked and would climb through there. Now he had to get some weapons because he wasn't sure if this was the last of the creatures. He looked around finding the Family heirloom sword, he needed it more than his father, he sheathed it and slung it on his person. As he continued to look around he found the Sub Machine Gun or SMG that his father keeps locked up, not sure as to where the other guns were they were missing. Which meant his parents knew. He found amo as well as ringlets he would also sling on his person. Now heading upstairs he would grab a backpack head downstairs again into the kitchen and stuff it with all the apples he could find.
The Male now ready to leave notices that the gate is now smashed down with ten of those creatures nearing to his house. "Fuck...really, god damn I really picked a bad time to come back..." Ripping out the gun he found he loaded it and shot the six of the ten creatures dead in the head, killing them instantly. His father taught him well for once. He would then notice the other four were two close to him, he had no choice. He tore out the sword on his back, and swung vigorously at creatures, slicing them into two or possible five pieces. Now coated in blood the male would look and just smirk and reshethe the sword after brandishing it from the blood to keep it clean, one thing was certain he could not walk on foot, so had to have some form of transportation. He found his skate board grabbed it as well as picked up the gun he just dropped to grab the gun, he reloaded it just in case and left his house hopefully next he would come back this would all be over.
His plan was simple, head to the school, find survivors, try to help them. And if he got too tired with skating he would have to find a near by vehicle and atempt to hijack. Though one thing was for certain no one was to go anywhere here his apples. He would think this as he pulled one out, took a bite and continued skating towards the school, with one hand ocupied with an apple, the other with a SMG.
Naruto Crisis ROLE PLAY: - Spoiler:
A blond haired ninja coughing with blood dripping down his cheek, he sighs and wipes his hand on his lip. "Damnit Light you exhausted me why did you use so much chakra?" The ninja would pant as he reached into his kunai pack pulling out a letter that was given to him at the battle field. Creasing his finger tips against the corner of the paper. He sighed looking at the words on the piece of paper. Dear Gunji Osaki, It seems that after watching you, you still do not know the truth of your parents. How they really died, if you wish to find the cruel reality of your parents death then come to the Rain village gates I will be waiting. There will I tell you the truth and give you two choices which will path you in either the same direction now or a new one in pure perfection this is up to you Osaki. Sincerely Anonymous
What the hell does this person know of my parents? The Amekage and Raikage told me they died in war trying to protect me. Is that a lie? Were they the ones who sent my parents to death? This is agrivating me, and what the hell does he mean by choices. Is this person planing to have me turn against the villages? I won't do it that's not right and I made a damn oath. Who cares what you think GUNJI, this is fun I can't wait to see this person maybe he might know the secret to undo our bonds and set me free so I can kill you and JIN!!! The ninja would sigh as he looks at the letter again. Suddenly a sound would be heard the ninja would jump up pull out a kunai. Knowing that he would have one chance to attack considering he was weak from the fight that Light and Reikon fought in. As the ninja walked forward towards the village gates a dark figure walked towards the ninja. "Who are you? Are you the one who sent this letter to me? What have you to say DAMNIT!" "Yes I am but please do not use such language around me please. Anyways I was a former ninja in the village of lightning, I am also a ninja that was part of the organization to exterminate your parents. It may seem like that may be a lie, but believe me it is not." The ninja would walk into a lit area revealing itself. Showing the figure of what seems to be a female with an anti cloud symbol around her arm. Her image was slightly mid age, around 34 years of age but somehow still was able to proceed as a ninja. "So you killed my father and mother!?" "I did but under the orders of lord Raikage and Amekage. Even so I did not want to yur mother was my friend, so I tell you right now I feel bad for doing it but it was so that your parents couldn't tell you why you were really born. Gunji Osaki, you were the death weapon to destroy the minor villages and the non alliance d villages of Cloud and Rain. You were their strength and they were afraid you would learn the truth so they sealed up your powers. I saw your fight with that lightning village ninja, you fought with insanity and it was not you was it? It was another you rather, thats because that you have powers beyond belief so they sealed them in three separate beings in your body, You, the Insane one, and someone else who I imagine loves to fight? Do you see what I am saying, to repay my debt in killing your parents I am offering you a way out. But to do so you will need to leave this village and never come back, secondly be the new leader of the fallen akatsuki. Under your power the villages will fall to your feet." "Your nuts, if what your saying is true then the Amekage lied to me for years!!!!!" The ninja would begin to be enraged, at a sudden rate a marking glowed on the ninjas chest. "If what you say is true old hag, then unseal me!!!!!" "Only if that is what you wish but know now after I do so, your friends are now your enemy" "WHAT EVER JUST DO IT!!!" The female ninja would form handsigns and suddenly, chakra would form in her hands. At a sudden rate her hand would strike the other ninja in the chest, causing the blond ninja to fly backwards into the village gate breaking it open, as he slid to a complete stop. The ninja would laugh, as his wounds suddenly began to close from the chakra in his body that was surging. He softly threw the broken gate to the side. "THIS POWER WHAT IS IT!!" "Your true self, Gunji Osaki, your now free" "Free? FREE!!!! AHAHAHA" He ran at the women and picked her up by the throat and laughed, As she looked down at him she smiled. He didn't like this remark and snapped her neck like that throwing her body aside like a twig. "Wicked wrench smiled...hmmm either way this feels good. I will take the old ladies request and revive the akatsuki but first lets recruit some ninja. Ah but what the hell I am here still anyways" Lifting up his hands a scythe appeared in his hands he snickered lifting up the scythe and threw it in mid air causing a tornado to attack villagers in its path of which killed 2,000 villagers in its path before dying out, satisfied the ninja pulled out a mask, carved an anti symbol on it and threw it on the ground of the rain village. He left in laughter at the chaos he caused.
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"This is rather boring where is all the excitement...thought being an anbu would be fun, but it's nothing but hell an boring..." A man would look up to the sky as his shimmering blond hair streamed down his back. As a red jacket is seen in the bright sunlight of the village. He would sigh jump down from a strange building structure, dropping from such a large height that if anyone else had, they would surely die. Using what seemed like a bright glow from the sole of his black like ninja shoes he landed to the ground with ease. Looking up at the sky once again, the image of the man was now clear. His eyes a bright blue and his hair obviously blond. A skinny man who seemed to wear tight skin ninja like clothing. On his chest multiple tattoos would show, many out of which was the symbol of the Anbu. Setting his head in a straight looking view he would now walk. Jingling of metal clanging together would be heard as each step he took. Suddenly his movements would quicken as he now ran out to the gates, an the attempt to leave for some fresh air a bunch of ninja stopped in front of him. "Ugh, so let me guess I am not allowed to leave the village by orders of the kage? WHY AM I NOT ALLOWED TO LEAVE!!!"
With a Burst of energy one of his markings began to glow, the ninja beginning to frighten ran off knowing the capability of the markings. Gunji soon began to laugh as he lifted up his hand, of which chakra shot out of his palm which through the gates open. "TRY AND STOP ME I NEED A BREAK!" This was not the ninja who was currently speaking this was someone else, someone more evil in his intentions, but in the same body. Perhaps the same entity... No matter he lifted up his head swaying his bangs out from his eyes. Looking rather annoyed he slowly calmed down. His marking stopped glowing and his heart pulsated at a normal rate. He looked up at the sky one last time before his departure of relaxing. It would be made clear he would intentionally come back but for now he had aimed to walk in a new village for quite sometime. His choice of picking unknown all he did was walk forward as he took his leave.
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As the female ninja spoke up winds began to clatter around her body, picking up dust and weaving it around in a circle. Suddenly the wind dies out, but then bursts again as it began to spin rapidly on the ground forming around the area to a precise point. The chakra picked up at a fast pace suddenly a dark figure was seen through the large wind tornado before the female. As the tornado began to disperse blond hair becomes slightly visible. Suddenly the gale dies out and footsteps are heard as the blond haired figure begins to walk in the sunlight. He would sigh then stop in his steps looking at the female who had her hands heavily guarded on her blades ready to attack. This made the figure smile, then he would look up at the sunlight. The figure stood tall at around five feet and nine inches, his hair was long and draped down in a straight fixture. He was clothed in a skin tight red hooded jacket that was open revealing his tattooed chest. His skin fairly pale, his bottoms were skin tight black pants with a studded silver belt around his waste, with dog chains laced around the loop of his pants. He would sigh and lift up his hand. "Hello there, and you are?" He would look at her then vanish, it seemed like he was fast with his movements though in reality he was just riding a wind current he had made with his chakra flow.
Appearing behind the female he would smile and talk to see if it would catch he by surprise. "No no forget I asked who you are, I don't care who you are to be honest. You wish to join the akatsuki or just try to kill the leader? Ah again a pointless question." He would vanish again and appear this time close up to her face. "Ah yes a female, indeed, quite a beautiful figure you are but are you strong?" He would laugh as he looked at her swords then appeared beside her looking at her swords. "ah yes these things, they look ancient, you think these could harm me? Interesting hmmmm well then, I believe that is enough talk from me. I could just get this over with and shread you to pieces but that's not very fun, thats boring. I know lets play a game." He would vanish again and appear infront of the female yet again this time slightly farther away than the first time. "I suggest a little game, I won't hurt you too badly, well that is if you can land a blow on me. Right then, lets see how shall the rules go...I know no rules just a fight yes? No no no that is boring...Hmmm fine then screw the game...LIGHT!!!" Suddenly his chakra would change in motion around him, the marking on his chest would glow brightly. "Dammit, this is who I have to fight! A FEMALE!!! GUNJI YOUR PATHETIC!!! She is a female I will have her bones carved up and made into a kunai this is too easy damnit!!!! Though she has courage, and I never dissected a female before, ah screw it lets have some fun!"
The ninja would vanish one last time as the wind began to pick up, as sparks began to flow through the wind. It suddenly flailed at the ground, as the ninja then appeared with a scythe in his hands. He would smile as he leaned the scythe over his shoulder. "WELL GIRLY TIME TO PLAY DOCTOR!!!!!!" The ninja would watch as the female began to flee from the area, he would look around and sigh. This is such a pain...she is running..Jin this is your field you attack the wench. His marking would vanish off his chest as the marking on his neck began to glow. The ninja began to crack his neck and looked at the buildings. "Bout damn time, Gunji's body is way to stuffy I was beginning to get Claustrophobic. Anyways Light, shes not a wench, just saying. Also on another note she knows she can't fight us head on. However she somehow will attack us best bet is a clone attack...So then why don't I even the fields." The ninja would form handsigns then suddenly vanish, as another image took his place, the image would then walk like the ninja towards one of the buildings, while the real ninja stood from afar watching from a tree branch. A tactical way of showing the options she has, either she is really stupid and plans to attack head on, which if she did her history Gunji is known for his combat styles, or rather my combat styles. Option B, the clone which will be used as a diversion to attack us while we are off guard. Clever but I am a genius when it comes to strategies. Lets watch and see how she reacts to this fast move.
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| | | Lupe
Posts : 11 Join date : 2013-01-10
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 4:51 am | |
| Few things that irk me about this app, firstly, to my knowledge at this point, dragons are not included in the plot and lore at all. I may be wrong about this and someone may have written them in beyond my knowledge. But at this point dragons are not in the plot at all, try to stick to canon and not write in your own race. | |
| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 12:36 pm | |
| If you want to get technical Dragons are a mythical creature of which is a demon like structure;However, is it fair you have a cat hybrid, when cat is not a race on here? Just stating a fact that if I can't have a Hybrid Dragon, why is hybrid cat allowed? seeing how the groups I see below are, [ Creators ] [ Dreamworld - Demons ] [ Dreamworld - Hybrids ] [ Dreamworld - Humans ] [ Dreamworld - Vampires ] [ Dreamworld - Elves ] [ Dreamworld - Angels ] no cat. Also Hybrid is a creature mixed of two races, if Dragon/Human Hybrid is not allowed, I don't believe Hybrid Cat/Human is allowed. Just a thought. I also saw a hybrid crow/vampire, when crow is also not on the list, so if I might interject, if Hybrid cat, and Hybrid crow are allowed, so too should the Hybrid dragon. | |
| | | Lupe
Posts : 11 Join date : 2013-01-10
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| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:06 pm | |
| If mythical creatures were on the list we would have include griffins and such. A crow is not a mythical creature and I am not going to list every animal in existence. Hybrids are a generality, a hybrid would be human if not for its animal counterpart. So all hybrids are mapped to a specific subcategory. To put it in laymens terms, no dragons until one flies by your bedroom window. | |
| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 1:09 pm | |
| You are aware, Elves, Angels, Demons, Vampires, are all mythological creatures thus your whole argument contradicts itself right? | |
| | | Lupe
Posts : 11 Join date : 2013-01-10
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| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 3:23 pm | |
| Indeed, any other mythological creature has to be written in. The way you put it, say a book has vampires, it has mythology, therefore it must have griffins. What makes it worse is the way you put it you have single-handedly wrote an entire race into a plot that is not yours, it is not even a hybrid in the app, but dragon hybrids are not acceptable if there are no dragons in existence. It like like role-playing Naruto and shoving in Samurai's because it fits. For it to be the way you describe dragons have to be part of the wildlife to be a hybrid. Intelligent for a cross-breed. In other words, accept the fact that dragons do not fit in the world because that was decided one day when making the plot. It just is, you can't change it for now, especially without even asking. | |
| | | Ezrhael White
Posts : 33 Join date : 2013-01-06 Age : 28 Location : Redoubt
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 4:46 pm | |
| I'm just... going to be the er... second peacekeeper here and say that creating a 'dragon' hybrid wasn't the only thing you did wrong. When we say hybrid, we mean the combination of any race and an animal found in nature. Just because elves, vampires, etc. exist in this world doesn't mean that every mythical creature does. As for the things that weren't pointed out: ♦ Your character's picture isn't showing up in the spoiler box; it says, 'Use the share links provided instead!' ♦ Zerochan is not a valid art source. Please find the original artist on sites like Deviantart or Pixiv. (For more information, please see this post.) ♦ 'Mythos' is not a race; it is a faction. (In this case, your race would be a hybrid.) ♦ 'Sovereign Union' is not a town. (Sovereign, I think, is what you were referring to.) ♦ Characters do not have multiple 'forms,' per se. They are like any other organism in the real world, which has a single form and can't change. Maybe different mental states or outfits, yes, but not forms. ♦ Please make sure links show as clickable links. (Hyperlink the actual text preferably to make it look more presentable.) It's not really... incorrect, but we never asked for a roleplay sample. It's nothing that would get your character rejected, but please take this into account for future reference. And, in general, there are some other regulations that you did not follow: ♦ Your avatar is supposed to be your character. I don't know your circumstances--as in, if it's another artist's interpretation of the same character--but it has to be from the picture of the character that was posted on the character sheet. ♦ Your username is supposed to be your character's full name. (There are exceptions to this rule for characters with long names, however. In this case, please fully right out just the first and the last name.) Your application will be accepted when these issues are corrected. Thank you. ♥ | |
| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:28 pm | |
| - Ezrhael White wrote:
- I'm just... going to be the er... second peacekeeper here and say that creating a 'dragon' hybrid wasn't the only thing you did wrong. When we say hybrid, we mean the combination of any race and an animal found in nature. Just because elves, vampires, etc. exist in this world doesn't mean that every mythical creature does. As for the things that weren't pointed out:
♦ Your character's picture isn't showing up in the spoiler box; it says, 'Use the share links provided instead!' ♦ Zerochan is not a valid art source. Please find the original artist on sites like Deviantart or Pixiv. (For more information, please see this post.) ♦ 'Mythos' is not a race; it is a faction. (In this case, your race would be a hybrid.) ♦ 'Sovereign Union' is not a town. (Sovereign, I think, is what you were referring to.) ♦ Characters do not have multiple 'forms,' per se. They are like any other organism in the real world, which has a single form and can't change. Maybe different mental states or outfits, yes, but not forms. ♦ Please make sure links show as clickable links. (Hyperlink the actual text preferably to make it look more presentable.)
It's not really... incorrect, but we never asked for a roleplay sample. It's nothing that would get your character rejected, but please take this into account for future reference.
And, in general, there are some other regulations that you did not follow:
♦ Your avatar is supposed to be your character. I don't know your circumstances--as in, if it's another artist's interpretation of the same character--but it has to be from the picture of the character that was posted on the character sheet. ♦ Your username is supposed to be your character's full name. (There are exceptions to this rule for characters with long names, however. In this case, please fully right out just the first and the last name.)
Your application will be accepted when these issues are corrected. Thank you. ♥ I Will change my character, it is interesting how you have the thought that have the thought that characters don't change forms, when in fact they sort of do, if a hybrid has the ability of both human and cat, then it might have the ability to shape shift into a cat. Or so most animes like to show. Never the less, S.A.H stands for my characters name, I like to shorten my names as much as i can with initials. I also do not agree with posting the same image as my avatar mostly for the reason that it is unethical, and quite irrelevant, none the less the avatar is my character. Also to say Zerochan is not an official place to find artwork or designs is like saying, 4chan is not the place to find memes. Zerochan works on the same line as Deviantart with drawings, renders, or designs, I know this because I am a graphic designer. Also I will fix the image weird how it does not work. Also the link is valid and that is the actual artist. As for the role play sample. I simply put that in so you know what to expect of me, nothing less than 4-5 paragraphs and 10-15 sentences in each. One more thing I would like to add, dragon is like demon if I just change race into demon would that be accepted if not I will go to elf. I really don't care. Just trying to clear up things and stating opinions | |
| | | Eeria White
Posts : 33 Join date : 2013-01-06 Age : 28 Location : Redoubt
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| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:29 pm | |
| No, zerochan is NOT a source. It is not where the ORIGINAL art was posted. We source it so artists do not get upset. | |
| | | Eeria White
Posts : 33 Join date : 2013-01-06 Age : 28 Location : Redoubt
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:32 pm | |
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| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:34 pm | |
| - Eeria White wrote:
- No, zerochan is NOT a source. It is not where the ORIGINAL art was posted. We source it so artists do not get upset.
The likely hood of an artist getting mad at people for using their artwork for a character(which might I add is what it normally is made for) is about the likely hood of it snowing in san diego, california. Which is very slim, mostly for the reason is if they cared they would A.Watermark it. B.Make it so you couldn't take the image(I am on deviant art so I have done this before) or C.POSTED COPYRIGHT. | |
| | | Katsu Hitoshi
Posts : 24 Join date : 2013-01-07 Age : 31
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:40 pm | |
| Either way you say it, we would prefer if you put the original instead so we can give credit where credit is due. Thank you | |
| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:42 pm | |
| - Katsu Hitoshi wrote:
- Either way you say it, we would prefer if you put the original instead so we can give credit where credit is due. Thank you
Yes, I understand that and I will do so but you seem to not understand, as to the fact that an artist of deviant art does not reply let alone check on anything because they are far too busy doing other things, I know because I am one of them and I could care less what other people do with my artwork. | |
| | | Katsu Hitoshi
Posts : 24 Join date : 2013-01-07 Age : 31
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:45 pm | |
| Not all deviant artists are as free with their works as you are. | |
| | | Ezrhael White
Posts : 33 Join date : 2013-01-06 Age : 28 Location : Redoubt
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Mon Jan 14, 2013 7:59 pm | |
| - S.A.H. wrote:
- I Will change my character, it is interesting how you have the thought that have the thought that characters don't change forms, when in fact they sort of do, if a hybrid has the ability of both human and cat, then it might have the ability to shape shift into a cat. Or so most animes like to show. Never the less, S.A.H stands for my characters name, I like to shorten my names as much as i can with initials. I also do not agree with posting the same image as my avatar mostly for the reason that it is unethical, and quite irrelevant, none the less the avatar is my character. Also to say Zerochan is not an official place to find artwork or designs is like saying, 4chan is not the place to find memes. Zerochan works on the same line as Deviantart with drawings, renders, or designs, I know this because I am a graphic designer. Also I will fix the image weird how it does not work. Also the link is valid and that is the actual artist. As for the role play sample. I simply put that in so you know what to expect of me, nothing less than 4-5 paragraphs and 10-15 sentences in each. One more thing I would like to add, dragon is like demon if I just change race into demon would that be accepted if not I will go to elf. I really don't care. Just trying to clear up things and stating opinions
I would like to say several things on this matter. This is our website, not an anime. Just because something is common in anime doesn't mean it is included in our site. Don't you think it would be pretty boring if all shows just did the same thing? What would make you want to watch them if they did? It's the same concept for websites. As for the rest... It doesn't matter if S.A.H. stands for your character's name--I realized that earlier--but it is written in the rules to put your character's full name as your username. We're being nice enough already to allow exceptions for long names. Don't try us. This goes for the next subject as well: your avatar. It doesn't matter what you think is ethical. Website rules are there for a reason, and if a person doesn't feel like complying to them, then that said person doesn't need to be on the site. On the issue of Zerochan, as people have said already, it's not an official art source. We source art so that you can link back to the original page, where the artist posted it, to avoid conflict. Now, you may have been alive for several years longer than me, but I can assure you that Zerochan is not where original art is posted. If you have been told that, you have been severely misinformed. It's like saying Photobucket is an acceptable website to source art from. It isn't. The art is posted from users who (in most cases) are not the original artist. - S.A.H. wrote:
- The likely hood of an artist getting mad at people for using their artwork for a character(which might I add is what it normally is made for) is about the likely hood of it snowing in san diego, california. Which is very slim, mostly for the reason is if they cared they would A.Watermark it. B.Make it so you couldn't take the image(I am on deviant art so I have done this before) or C.POSTED COPYRIGHT.
Yes, the likely hood may be low, but it is possible. The likely hood of getting into a car crash isn't very high, but they happen right? I'm not sure if you're part of the MMD community, but to give you an example: there have been cases of people using an artist's model without credit (or saying that it is, in fact, their own), and you know what that artist did? They stopped producing models for the public. Any original work that you yourself have done does in fact have a form of copyright. Unless you hand the art off to someone else, that's the thing; it was made by you, it is your's. You have full permission to stop posting you pieces of work or sharing them with others if you wish, and that's exactly what we are trying to avoid happening. But yes, to conclude, it would be acceptable if you were to label your character as a demon. Just keep in mind, however, that they are not granted multiple forms. | |
| | | Celios
Posts : 22 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 24
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Tue Jan 15, 2013 11:54 am | |
| Alright, S.A.H, I've tried to be nice. Please stop arguing with admins and be mature, you're acting like your five! Any more outbursts and you will be banned. NO EXCEPTION. :3 | |
| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Tue Jan 15, 2013 12:32 pm | |
| I wasn't acting like I was five, anyways I will edit my character. I also was not arguing I was stating opinions. I have the right to think them, weird how people get opinions and arguing mixed up anyways I will edit. | |
| | | S.A.H.
Posts : 12 Join date : 2013-01-13 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Tue Jan 15, 2013 1:26 pm | |
| -BUMP- Finished i could not find the artist for, the image however I claim no rights to anything but the graphic designs on the image. (TEXT, Pattern, White Silhouete, and Blue Glow) | |
| | | Lupe
Posts : 11 Join date : 2013-01-10
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Tue Jan 15, 2013 3:15 pm | |
| - S.A.H. wrote:
- "weird how people get opinions and arguing mixed up"
Keegan may share my views, but I am less tolerant. Arguing is sharing an opinion in a less polite manner. This comes across to me as an undermining and smart comment. I will now issue you with a one day ban, this is your yellow card. This ban is not just for the comment but also for your childish behaviour, please do not act as childish in future. | |
| | | Celios
Posts : 22 Join date : 2013-01-12 Age : 24
Character sheet Level: 1 Status: Healthy
| Subject: Re: Satomi Finished Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:06 pm | |
| - Lupe wrote:
- Arguing is sharing an opinion in a less polite manner. This comes across to me as an undermining and smart comment.
Thank you Lawlet. That is exactaly my point. ouo If you were to handle these things politely then I wouldn't be frustrated at the moment... Like on the race confusion topic. You were acting all know-it-all and I'm-smarter-then-you with the exact dentition of hybrid. We do hope for you to continue to rp here! Just please, be more polite and less show off-like it seems rude. :3 | |
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